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Mi bone memoras, kiam mi envenis tiun kafejon la unuan fojon, antaŭ kelkaj monatoj.

I well remember when I came into the cafe the first time, a few months ago.

I can well remember the first time I went into the cafe, a few months ago.

I remember well the first time I went into that café a few months ago.

I remember well when I came into that café the first time several months earlier.

I remember well the first time I entered that café a few months ago.

I clearly remember the day, a few months ago, when I entered the cafe for the first time.

I remember well the day I entered that cafe for the first time, several months ago.

I well remember when I first entered that cafe.

I clearly remember my first visit to that cafe several months ago.

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Mi ĉirkaŭrigardis la ejon por serĉi tablon kaj mendi mian matenmanĝon, kaj mi vidis Fernandon sidanta ĉe fenestro, en la fundo de la ĉambro.

I looked around the place to find a table and order my breakfast, and that was when I saw Fernando sitting by the window down at the end of the room.

I looked around the interior to locate a table and order breakfast, and saw Fernando sitting at a window at the far side of the room.

I looked around to find a table and order my breakfast, and I saw Fernando sitting at a window in the back of the room.

I looked around the place to find a table and order my breakfast, and I saw Fernando sitting at the window in the bottom of the room.

I looked around the place to find a table and ordered my breakfast and saw Fernando sitting at a window, in the back of the room.

As I scanned the room for a table to order my breakfast, my eyes landed on Fernando, sitting by the window at the back of the cafe.

I was looking around the place to find a table and order my breakfast, when I saw Fernando sitting at the window in the back of the room.

I looked around the place to find a table and order my breakfast, and I saw Fernando, sitting at the window in the back of the room.

Looking for a seat, I spotted Fernando sitting by a window at the far end of the room.

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Lia kalva, ronda kapo brilis sub la lumo de la mateno, kaj lia longa, pendanta nazo ŝajnis al mi iom komika.

His bald, round head shone in the morning light and his long hanging nose seemed rather comical to me.

His round bald head was shining in the morning light, and his long drooping nose struck me as a bit comical.

His bald, round head was shining in the morning light, and his long honker of a nose struck me as a little funny.

His bald, round head shone under the light of the morning and his long, drooping nose seemed to me a bit comical.

His bald, round head shone under the morning light, and his long, hanging nose seemed almost funny.

His bald, round heat shone in the morning sunlight, and his long, sagging nose struck me as comical.

His bald round head shone in the morning light, and his long, droopy nose struck me as almost comical.

His bald, round head shone under the morning light, and his long jutting nose seemed to me a bit comical.

His bald dome glinted in the morning sun, and his long, drooping nose seemed almost comical.

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Li aspektis kiel iu, kiu atendas aliulon.

He looked like he was waiting for someone.

He had the look of someone waiting for somebody else to show up.

He looked like he was waiting for someone.

He looked like someone who was waiting for another.

He seemed like he was waiting for someone.

He appeared to be waiting for someone.

He looked as if he were waiting for someone.

He appeared to be waiting for someone.

He seemed to be expecting someone.

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Li havis antaŭ si etan tason da kafo kaj bluan plastan skatoleton.

In front of him he had a tiny cup of coffee and a small blue plastic box.

In front of him were a little cup of coffee and a blue plastic box.

He had a little cup of coffee in front of him and a little blue, plastic box.

He had before him a small cup of coffee and a small, blue plastic basket.

In front of him, he had a small cup of coffee and a blue plastic box.

On the table in front of him he had a small cup of coffee and an unassuming blue plastic box.

In front of him was a little cup of coffee and a small blue plastic box.

He had in front of him a small cup of coffee and a tiny blue plastic box.

Before him on the table sat a tiny cup of coffee and a small box made of blue plastic.

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Li kun mieno de kontenteco rigardis al mi, kaj kvankam troviĝis pluraj tabloj liberaj, li laŭte invitis min:

He looked at me with a contented expression, and even though there were several free tables, he loudly called to me,

He was gazing at me with a placid expression, and although there were plenty of free tables, he called out an invitation:

He looked at me like he was pleased to see me, and although there were a lot of empty tables, he called out an invitation:

He, with a contented expression, looked at me and although there were many free tables, he loudly invited me:

With a look of contentment, he noticed me and although there were several empty tables, he loudly invited me.

He watched me with an expression of contentment, and, although there were plenty of open tables, he called to me across the room,

He looked at me with an expression of contentment, and although there were several empty tables, he called out loudly to me:

He looked at me with an air of contentment, and although there were several free tables, he loudly invited me

He gazed up at me with an air of contentment, and though there were plenty of tables free, he invited me to sit with him:

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– Amiko, bonvolu sidiĝi ĉe mi!

“Hey friend, please sit with me!”

“Say, buddy, come sit with me!”

— Please join me, my friend!

– Friend, please sit with me!

“Friend, please sit with me!”

“Please, come join me, friend!”

— Friend, come and sit with me!

– “Friend, come sit with me”.

“Greetings, friend!” he called out. “Come, join me.”

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Dum momento, mi timis, ke mi ne memoras pri de longa tempo ne vidata konato, kaj mi rapide serĉis en mia memoro.

For a moment I wondered if he was someone I knew from long ago, and I quickly searched my memory.

For a moment I was afraid it was an acquaintance I hadn’t seen in a while, and quickly consulted my memory.

For a moment, I was afraid that he was an old acquaintance I couldn’t place, and I did a quick search of my memory.

For a moment, I was afraid that I do not remember an acquaintance I had not seen in a long time, and I quickly searched in my memory.

For a moment, I was afraid that it was someone I didn’t remember from ages ago, and I quickly searched my memory.

I worried for a moment that I didn’t recognize an old friend. I wracked my brain,

For a moment I feared that I did not recognize a long-ago acquaintance, and quickly searched my memory.

For a moment, I was afraid I was forgetting someone I knew and had not seen for a long time, and I quickly searched my memory.

I struggled to place him, fearing that I’d forgotten an old acquaintance.

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Ne, mi ne konas tiun long- nazan, pendorelan maljunulon, sed lia invito iel sonis al mi nerezistebla,

No, I didn’t know this old fellow with his long nose and drooping ears, but his invitation sounded irresistible.

No…I didn’t know this long-nosed, big-eared old guy, but his invitation sounded somehow irresistible,

But no, I didn’t know the old guy with the long nose and low-hanging earlobes. Still, for some reason his invitation was compelling.

No, I do not know that long-nosed old man, but his invitation somehow sounded to me irresistible,

No, I don’t know that long-nosed, dangling-eared old man, but I couldn’t pass up his invitation,

but no, I was certain I didn’t know this old man with his long nose and sagging ears.

No, I didn’t know this long-nosed old man with the pendulous ears, but his invitation somehow sounded irresistible to me.

No, I did not know this long nosed thin-as-a-rail elder, but the invitation sounded somehow irresistible,

But after a moment I was sure: I had never met this old man with the long nose and the droopy ears. Still, his invitation sounded irresistable.

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kaj se eventuale li proponos interesan babiladon, eble estus oportune ne engluti mian matenmanĝon maĉante miajn zorgoplenajn pensojn, tute sola.

Maybe he would provide interesting conversation, which would be better than me eating my breakfast alone, thinking about my own worries.

and if he wound up starting an interesting conversation, maybe it wouldn’t be so bad not to gulp down my breakfast while chewing on my worried thoughts, all alone.

I figured that if it turned out that he had something interesting to say, maybe it would be good for me not to wolf down my breakfast all alone, consumed by my worries.

and if eventually he would offer an interesting conversation, maybe it would be opportune not to eat my breakfast chewing my worry-filled thoughts all alone.

and maybe he would eventually make for interesting conversation, maybe it would be a chance not to wolf down my breakfast with my troubled thoughts totally alone.

However, his unexpected invitation was too tempting to resist. He might provide interesting company; perhaps it would be worthwhile not to devour my breakfast alone in the isolating haze of my own worries.

Perhaps he would suggest an interesting topic of conversation, thereby rescuing me from chewing on my worries while gulping my breakfast, all alone.

and if eventually he proposed an interesting chat, it would possibly be appropriate not to swallow my breakfast while meditating on my worried thoughts all alone.

And if it turned out he could make interesting conversation, that might be preferable to a breakfast all alone with my worries.

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Mi decidis riski.

I decided to take the risk,

I decided to chance it.

I decided to risk it.

I decided to risk it.

I decided to take a chance.

I decided to run the risk.

I decided to risk it.

I decided to take a chance.

So I took a chance:

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Mi mendis mian manĝon de servisto kaj sidiĝis ĉe la nekonato.

and I ordered a meal from a server and sat down at the stranger’s table.

I ordered my meal from a waiter and sat down next to the stranger.

I ordered my food from a waiter and sat down with the stranger.

I ordered my meal from a server and sat with the stranger.

I ordered my meal from the barista and sat next to the stranger.

I ordered my breakfast and sat down with the stranger.

I ordered my breakfast from a waiter and sat down at the stranger’s table.

I ordered my food from the server and sat with the stranger.

After placing my order, I went over and sat across from the stranger.

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– Bonan matenon. Bela vetero, ĉu?

“Good morning. Nice weather, isn’t it?”

“Good morning. Nice day out, eh?”

— Good morning. Nice weather, no?

– Good morning. Beautiful weather, huh?

“Good morning, nice weather, isn’t it?”

“Good morning. Nice weather we’re having, isn’t it?” I offered.

— Good morning. Nice weather, isn’t it?

– Good morning, beautiful weather, eh?

“Good morning,” I said. “Nice weather we’re having.”

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– Bonan. Mia nomo estas Fernando.

“Yes, it is. My name is Fernando.

“Morning. My name’s Fernando.

— Nice. I’m Fernando.

– Hello. My name is Fernando.

“It is. My name is Fernando.

“Yes. My name is Fernando.

— Mornin’. My name is Fernando.

– Good morning, my name is Fernando.

“Morning. The name’s Fernando.

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Mi ne volas perdigi al vi tempon. Mi ne ĝenos vin per teda interparolo kun stulta maljunululo.

I don’t want to waste your time. You don’t want to listen to the boring rambling of an old fool.

I’m not looking to waste your time…I won’t bother you with old man talk.

I don’t want to waste your time. I won’t bother you, making you have a tedious conversation with a foolish old man.

I do not want to waste your time. I will not bother you with tedious chit chat with a stupid old man.

I don’t want to waste your time. I will not bother you with small talk with a dumb old man.

I hope not to waste your time. I won’t bother you with the stupid babblings of an old man.

I don’t want to waste your time. I won’t annoy you with a boring conversation with a stupid old man.

I don’t want to waste your time. I won’t bother you with boring discussion with a silly senior.

Look, friend, I won’t waste your time with an old fool’s small talk.

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Mi estas okdekunujara, kaj almenaŭ tion mi ankoraŭ ne forgesis, ke maljunuloj estas preskaŭ ĉiam enuigaj homoj.

I am 81 years old, and one of the few things I still remember is that old people are almost always boring.

Even at 81 I haven’t forgotten that old people are pretty much always bores.

I’m 81, and if nothing else, I at least remember that old people are almost always boring.

I am 81 years old, and at least I haven’t yet forgotten that old people are almost always boring people.

I am 81 years old, and at least I haven’t forgotten that old people are almost always boring people.

I’ve been around 81 years, but I haven’t yet forgotten that ancient characters are usually boring.

I am 81 years old, and at least I haven’t yet forgotten that old people are almost always boring.

I am eighty-one years old, and at least I haven’t forgotten that elders are almost always boring people.

I may be 81, but I still remember how boring the elderly can be.

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Mi vokis vin por eta peto. Ĉu vi bonvolus ludi ununuran partion de domeno kun mi?

I called you for a little request. Would you kindly play a single game of dominos with me?

I only wanted to ask a small favor: would you mind playing a single round of dominoes with me?

I called you over because I have a small request. Would you be willing to play just one game of dominoes with me?

I called you to ask a small favor. Would you play just one game of dominoes with me?

I called you over for a small favor. Would you like to play a game of dominoes with me?

I called you over with a humble request. Would you play a single round of dominoes with me?

I called you over for a tiny favor. Would you be willing to play one single round of dominos with me?

I called you for a small request. Would you like to play a single round of dominoes with me?

No, I invited you here for a small favor. Would you be kind enough to play a round of dominoes with me? Just one?

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Tio kostos al vi nur kelkajn minutojn, dum kiuj vi povos senĝene manĝi vian matenmanĝon.

It will only take you a few minutes, and you can eat your breakfast during the game.”

It’ll only take a few minutes, and you can eat your breakfast uninterrupted in the meantime.”

It will only take a few minutes, and you can eat your breakfast easily enough while we play.

That will cost you only a few minutes, during which you can casually eat your breakfast.

It’ll only take a few minutes while you can eat your breakfast undisturbed.”

It will only rob you of a few minutes of your day, during which you can certainly enjoy your breakfast.”

It would cost only a few minutes of your time, and while playing you could eat your breakfast in peace.

It will only take a few minutes, while you can conveniently eat your breakfast.

It’ll take only a few minutes, really. I won’t make a peep, and you’ll be able to enjoy your breakfast in peace.”

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– Interesa propono. Ĉu vi kutimas inviti nekonatajn homojn por tio?

“An interesting proposal. Do you have habit of asking strangers to do that?”

“Interesting offer…do you usually invite strangers for a round of dominoes?”

— An interesting proposal. Do you usually invite strangers to your table?

– Interesting proposal. Do you normally invite strangers to do this?

“Interesting offer. Do you usually invite strangers like that?”

“An interesting invitation. Are you in the habit of inviting strangers to play dominoes?”

— Interesting suggestion. Do you typically invite strangers in this way?

– Interesting proposal. Do you usually invite strangers for that?

“That’s a tempting offer. Do you often ask strangers to play dominoes?”

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– Jes, sed malmultaj akceptas la inviton. Ĉiuj hastas. Mi dankas, ke vi konsentas.

“Yes, but not many accept. Everyone is in a hurry. Thank you for consenting.”

“Yes, but not many take me up on it. Everybody’s in a hurry. Thanks for agreeing to stay.”

— Yes, but very few accept the invitation. They’re all in a hurry. I’m grateful that you agreed.

– Yes, but few accept the invitation. They are all in a hurry. I am thankful that you agree to it.

“Yes, but few accept the invitation. Everyone is in a hurry. I thank you for accepting.”

“Yes, but few accept. Everyone is in a hurry. I am glad that you are willing.”

— Yes, but very few accept. They are all in a hurry. Thank you for agreeing.

– Yes, but few accept the invitation. Everyone is in a hurry. Thank you for accepting.

“Oh yes, but few accept the invitation. Everybody’s in such a hurry! But if you’re up for it, I’d be grateful.”

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– Jes, ni ludu unu partion.

“Yes, let’s play one match.”

“Okay, one round.”

— Okay, let’s play a game.

– Yes, let’s play one game.

“Yeah, let’s play one game.”

“Sure, let’s play a round.”

— Yes, let’s play one round.

–Yes, let’s play a round.

“All right then. Let’s play a round.”